hasna mana hai

by anusha garg
(lucknow,uttar pradesh,india)

Today my sister praised my writing skills
through which she feels I can really earn bills.

She feels whatever I write
is really nice and bright.

It's just that sometimes I am really sad
because of which I write which is not too bad.

She feels that the feelings I expressed on notebook is really worth to upload on Facebook.

I wish I could really improve it
if not much a bit.

I know when I'll show her this poem
she will want to copy it on a forum.

She will insist to show it to Mom
and then I'll say "C'mon.

Mom will feel I wasted time on writing
and it will hurt me like a biting.

I know I have really gone mad,
but seriously tell was it too bad..

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Jan 11, 2013
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Touching NEW
by: Anonymous

Sturctured good, and expressive of the poet.

Jan 06, 2013
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Great poem. NEW
by: Anonymous

What a heart felt poem. Never let anyone stand in the way of your purpose 'even mum'

You have one life to be the happiest you can be so enjoy your writing, focus on your grammar and read a lot!

Don't forget to download your free copy of 'keys to unlocking your power.' at the website..

Victoria Grant

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