Mother

by Harinee DNaidu
(Chennai)

A Mother is a Sweet Soul,
Which no one can replace.
Her love is made of deep devotion
and of sacrifice and pain.

It is endless and unselfish,
and enduring come what may!
For nothing can destroy it
or take that love away!

Our most cherishd loved one,
Giving unlimited love and care;
Her love is unconditional,
She is joyful in our triumphs & sad in our sorrows!

She is the sunlight in our day,
She is the moon we see far away.
She is the tree we lean upon,
She is the one that makes troubles be gone!

Sacrificing herself for us,
She is the most outstanding
women in the life of ours;
She is our love,life and our mother!..

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Aug 23, 2013
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VERY GOOD NEW
by: Anonymous

EXCELLENT THOUGHT,
GOOD EFFORTS FOR MOTHER.
KEEP IT UP.

Aug 22, 2013
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excellent. NEW
by: rekha simon

excellent creativity.i like it very much...is it ur work?

Aug 22, 2013
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MOTHER NEW
by: Anonymous

The Mother is a gift given to us by GOD in Heaven.
Even our country is called Motherland.(Bharat Maa)
On this Earth our goddess is the Mother.
The loss of the Mother cannot be compensated by anything on this planet.
Good Harinee Nice thought. All the best for the future.

Aug 22, 2013
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MOTHER NEW
by: Anonymous

The MOTHER is a Gift given to us by GOD in Heaven.
Even our Country is called Motherland.(Bharat Maa)
On this Earth our godess is the Mother.
The loss of the Mother cannot be compensated by anything on this planet.
Good Harinee- Nice thought all the best for the future.

Aug 22, 2013
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nice poem NEW
by: Shailendra Phegade

Excellent efforts to express mother in words.
Though the words are smaller to occupy mother's presence.

Aug 21, 2013
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Worth recommending for english language study NEW
by: Ajay Phalnikar

Nice poem, rich in content, easy to understand.
Try to shorten two long lines, it could be better.
Change women (plural) to woman (singular).
It is worth including in text books / reference books for students of English language and literature.

Aug 21, 2013
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Very very good NEW
by: Mayuri Naidu

Lovely words I liked it. Your thoughts for mother is very good.

Aug 21, 2013
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Very very good NEW
by: Mayuri Naidu

Lovely words I liked it. Your thoughts for mother is very good.

Aug 21, 2013
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SWEET THOUGHT NEW
by: MEHTRE

Baby is a part of Mother's Body. Even though we are away from her,each and every feeling is from deep internal mind and heart touching.

Very Good Harinee I like it very much. May God Bless you,- Beautiful & Sweet life like ur thought.

Aug 21, 2013
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comments NEW
by: girija

this poem is really good.

Aug 21, 2013
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WHAT IS HOME WITHOUT A MOTHER ? NEW
by: M.X. D'Souza

21.8.2013

Beautiful Thoughts Harinee, very well written - such thoughts can only be for a Mother. I look at that picture hanging on the wall at home which says, "WHAT IS HOME WITHOUT A MOTHER",- True, isn't it ? And my thoughts go back to my mother - yes, nobody can replace a mother in anybody's life.

Aug 21, 2013
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Very Good NEW
by: Balaji

This is a really great think. Good one.
God Bless you.

Aug 21, 2013
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Good NEW
by: Meher

A very apt & correct description of a mother.

Aug 21, 2013
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Very very good NEW
by: Ajit Mudaliar

Your poem seems to be purely an imagination taking us to the old days.Unfortunately, seldom do we find find such mothers today, because the mother of 21st century is a contemporary women who is so busy in her office chores and social work that she hardly finds time for children.

GOD BLESS YOU



Aug 21, 2013
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GOOD ONE NEW
by: SURESH

DEAR HARINEE,

VERY GOOD KEEPIT UP.

SURESH

Aug 21, 2013
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MOM Superb NEW
by: Vijaya Rao

Dear Harinee,
Beautiful, Its awasome, excellent, supereb dont have words to tell.
All the best for your future keep on going.

Aug 21, 2013
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superb NEW
by: seetha iyer

Superb,beautiful & Lovely Thoughts harinee...really a good one...

Aug 21, 2013
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good one NEW
by: Anonymous

Dear harinee

Its awasome, excellent, supereb dont have words
to tell.
all the best for your future keep on going

pravin bangera

Aug 21, 2013
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lovely.... NEW
by: srinivas

Dear Harinee....
Beatiful...n..thoughtful, sensible n emotional..flow of words shows the deep understanding of the soul called MOM and what u observed about your Mother throughout your life.
You drew the entire portrait of Mom through words. Perfect ! Loved it..keep it up...n draw more pictures in the days to come...

Aug 21, 2013
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this is for harinee NEW
by: ajita nayak

Superb..harinee..God bless you. .

Aug 21, 2013
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this is for harinee NEW
by: ajita nayak

Superb..harinee..God bless you. .

Aug 20, 2013
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MOTHER'. LOVE NEW
by: Anonymous

I don't know her age, but her thought & love for mother are good. In the last paragraph. The ryhminmg does not click. All the Beste

Aug 20, 2013
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Very Thought full NEW
by: Nitin K

Excellent!Keep it up ,god bless u.-

Aug 20, 2013
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Excellent NEW
by: Latiks

Excellent... Best wishes for ur success.

Aug 20, 2013
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Mother of mine NEW
by: Anonymous

Nice quote

Aug 20, 2013
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mother NEW
by: Anonymous

Excellant. Keep it up.

Aug 20, 2013
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Good NEW
by: Saravanan dr

This is a great one.....to all moms!!!
Thanks harinee

Aug 20, 2013
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Good NEW
by: Saravanan dr

This is a great one.....to all moms!!!
Thanks harinee

Aug 20, 2013
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nice NEW
by: Anonymous

Excellent donald duck

Aug 20, 2013
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love u soooooooo much mom NEW
by: christo

anju it was awesome dr

Aug 20, 2013
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wishes NEW
by: nazeer

Ultimate 1:) Luv yu mom <3 Congo Harini..!!

Aug 20, 2013
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I miss u mom NEW
by: Anonymous

Excellent!!!

Aug 20, 2013
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I miss my mom NEW
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Excellent!!!!

Aug 20, 2013
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I love u ma mom...... NEW
by: Shweta Nair

Its awsome n so inspirational....... God bles u Harinee........

Aug 20, 2013
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I love u ma mom...... NEW
by: Shweta Nair

Its awsome n so inspirational....... God bles u Harinee........

Aug 20, 2013
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mother NEW
by: Anonymous

Hi Harinee, really appreciate your thoughts.

You are a lucky daughter to your parents.

Aug 20, 2013
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nyc quote NEW
by: Pranav Naphade

Gud
Nyc quote.....!!! :)

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