Without A Will

by Evin C.
(Rowland Heights, CA, US)

With a clouded heart and mind
The contract for my soul has been signed.
To the Devil I sold,
Not a lie has been told.

This life I want to end,
The hole in my heart seems to forever deeepen.
Suicide I shall gratefully commit,
With a bullet, I shall be hit.

The love I have for her had been cruelly butchered.
My will to live has finally faded.
My time has arrived to be with the departed.

Without a will to fight for,
Let me die with no rancor.





Note: This was my FIRST poem I wrote on my own.
So, most likely, there are some mistakes that could be
fixed. So please, don't be too harsh, as this was
the only way I could relieve the sadness I had to go through 2 years ago. Critiques/suggestions are wholeheartedly welcomed!


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Sep 17, 2012
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by: Evin C.

Thank you! It's just that when I read it over again, it sounds choppy and incomplete. I tried my best to follow the rules of the Italian sonnet, but I ended up straying away from it in the end.

Sep 16, 2012
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by: Soumya

Your poem is really nice, in respect of your first poem. Keep writing, poetry does not value the errors, it values what your heart says

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